1.’each throat was parched’ says how thirsty they were.
‘seemed a little speck then it seemed a mist’ that means something is either getting bigger or closer
‘with throats unslaked and black lips baked, we could not laugh nor wail’ means their throats were to dry to speak.
‘the western wave rested the broad bright sun’ shows the sun was setting
‘i cried a sail a sail’says that he saw a ship
‘the souls did from their bodies fly ‘ tells us people are dying
2.passed,was,westward something sky fist seemed mist certain wist unslaked lips stood suck sail shape she steadies sun ( it emphasizes how silent it is )-restless gossameres ( how much they move its like their alive)
3 The mariner says every thing as if he is moping and said as he always says things like he is really upset as he uses words that would make you sad
November 16, 2016 at 9:40 am
Kyron,
You have shown that you are able to infer possible interpretations of character through paying close attention to the language.
To develop this aspect of your written work, identify a figurative device and then explore how this might help to enhance the meanings.
March 2, 2017 at 4:57 pm
Select a Quotation Achieved!